Looking after Tom the cat. ingredients Cat food water bowl
1. Firsty grab the cat food from the pantry, open the cat food and pour it into a bowl.
2. Secondly, fill the bowl up with crystal clear water.
3. Thirdly, call Tom over by saying putepusspusspuspuss here kitty kitty kitty.
4. Give Him a good pat and a scratch under the neck.
5. Feed him his cat food.
this is a great story calum Im sure tom the cat will apreciate it and he will definetly have a good caregiver from now on.I love how you used the adjective and said crystal clear water instead of just water besides they could of mistaken it for sparkling water or murky green pond water so well done and I love how you added linking words at the start of the paragraph like firsty and lastly.but I would suggest adding some more detail on step 5
ReplyDeletebut other then that absoloutly amazing and you have done great.
Ava
Thanks
DeleteI really like your work Calum i wish i could be like you
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